Can English be a Singaporean mother tongue?
According to Lu, some of the reasons for such an observation
were due to the facts that too high emphasis on English would not be in line
with the government education policy which aims Singaporeans to become
effectively bilingual, as well as the low level of recognition by the world
that Singapore is a 'native' English-speaking country. He stated that proponent of the view
that English can be a Singaporean mother tongue also put forth the idea that we
experience the linguistic divides caused by the conflicting linguistic
interests between younger generation and older generation who generally believe
in enduring links between one's biological heritage and cultural practice.
Although Lu gave convincing reasons for
English to be regarded as our mother tongue in future, I beg to differ that
English can, and should be a Singaporean mother tongue.
In the 3rd reason for English to be a
Singaporean mother tongue, he mentioned that Singapore is yet to receive enough
recognition from the world that it is an English-speaking country with its
citizens speaking English fluently. However, he also should not forget the
current economics movement that is taking place in the world right now. Many
countries, including Western countries who require Singaporeans to take their English
proficiency test to make sure that candidates have good command of English before
they can be considered admitted to the school, are in fact investing a huge sum
of money into various industries in Singapore. This is because Singaporeans are
capable human resources with relatively high command of English, compared to
their counterparts in other regions in Asia. As English is already regarded as
the global language which is essential in various areas, such as business,
economics and even politics, human resources with the ability to speak English
were highly sought after, and this is the reason why Singapore were highly successful in attracting many foreign investors from all over the world. Therefore, emphasis on
English was the key reason why Singapore managed to outdo its neighbouring
countries in terms of economics and raising the standard of living within
itself.
Hence, I advocate that English should not be a
Singaporean mother tongue. English became too important to be considered as a
'second class' language and under no circumstances, should people regard
English merely as a Singaporean mother tongue, for doing so will bring a myriad
of implications in the near future.
Did not quote: “enduring links” … biological heritage and cultural practice.
ReplyDeleteThesis Statement found
Although Lu gave convincing reasons for English to be regarded as our mother tongue in future, I beg to differ that English can, and should be a Singaporean mother tongue
Pros:
-has stand
-has a main idea
Cons:
-Not specific
-justifies discussion
Recommendation:
Focus on a specific area to discuss upon.
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes & your suggestions to improve!
DeleteYour reader response is quite good, Yechan, in that you adopt a fairly clear viewpoint and attempt to support it while referencing the Lu article. You provide an ongoing summary, starting in the first paragraph and extending your review of Lu into the second paragraph. By the third paragraph I can see your stand, though it is not stated as a conventional thesis. Can you alter that to make it more logical, and thus more effective?
ReplyDeleteWhat baffles me a bit is your support for your thesis. Honestly, I don't see how your supports act as a counter to Lu's position. You seem to suggest that making English a mother tongue would relegate it to "second class" position, but is that what Lu would say?
Some language issues to consider:
-- revisit the verb tenses used (I'd suggest that you use present tense for your reporting verbs
-- Singapore were highly successful (s-v agreement)
Thanks for your effort!